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Following along with my story of Erla, warrior girl, here is Part 3. Part 1 is here, Part 2 is here.
Here are this week's prompts. I asterisk them as I use them in the story.
Lever*
Poison*
Fragrance
Between*
Immediate*
Oven*
And/or
Sunshine*
Feathers*
Rotten*
Dubious*
Becoming*
Hard*
Erla took several deep breaths, and found her warrior resolve hardening inside her. Trilby and Merlin swathed between her feet immediately, no longer casting dubious glances in her direction as they never had seen her cry before. It was like a lever had been thrown and poison had entered the parlour. As one, they moved off to the fireplace and sat on their feather cushion together and stared at Daddy who was looking down at his hands, quiet and reflective.
"No. I need to say a few things, Daddy," she said, "And please don't interrupt me, OK?"
He nodded.
"Mama has done her best, really Daddy. I know she's not like other mamas as she always feels so, well, so rotten. I want her to be well, to be like she used to be, playing with me in the sunshine, baking cookies in the oven. But you left us Daddy, you left me and her. And all I had really, were my friends here Merlin and Trilby."
Erla stopped and gulped.
"But weekends?" interrupted Daddy, looking very upset, "I saw you weekends?"
"I could have spent weekends here with my friends, I don't like your condo or your friend who wants to become my Mama."
Daddy put his head in his hands.
"But you have to move in with me!" he said.
"And school Daddy? Where am I going to school now? I like my school."
"I thought you would go to the school near the condo, it's a good city school....."
"I don't like the city! What about Merlin and Trilby? I don't want a new Mama!"
Erla felt close to tears, she didn't want to sound whiny, she needed Daddy to pay attention to her, to stop arranging her life into this frightening picture. And what about Mama?
"Matilda doesn't like cats." Daddy said firmly, standing up and picking up her knapsack from the floor,"We will arrange for the humane society to take them, alright?"
And he took her hand and tugged her towards the door.
Erla struggled with her rage. It came roaring to the surface but she knew to keep it hidden from Daddy. She followed him out to the hall and as they reached the door she told him she'd forgotten her book.
She turned to go back to the parlour and when Daddy stepped on to the porch she rushed forward and slammed the front door closed and with effort turned the deadbolt.
Trilby and Merlin stood in awe, mouths open, and she fell to the floor and embraced them, ignoring the hammering on the door, the yelling of her father and the pounding of her own heart.
Yay Erla. I am really, really glad she defied her Daddy. And hope with all of my heart she is successful.
ReplyDeleteAh I'm not so sure, we will wait for next week's prompts.
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Brave Erla! But what will happen to her now? I hope things turn out well.
ReplyDeleteOh me too, she is a warrior and warriors win usually. Daddy needs to get a grip.
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LOVE YOU, YOUR COMMENT MADE ME CRY THIS EARLY MORNING
ReplyDeleteYES, SO HAPPY TO SEE MY GIRL AND SO HAPPY I HAVE A GOOD MIND.
I am so happy you have a good mind too Ernestine. You hang in there girlie!
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Well done, Erla! (and WWW!) What's needed now is a wee bit of Merlin/Trilby magic. :)
ReplyDeleteI was thinking the same thing, T. They are a magical trio.
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Wow. This sounds similar to many stories of divorce and child custody.
ReplyDeleteTruly it does Gigi. My own wasn't easy, but that's another story.
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I am intrigued now and must go back in time to read the beginnings.... Cheers to Erla!
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